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« on: November 08, 2006, 08:20:53 AM »

My Lord, my God, my Savior,
my Father up above,
how is it that you can love me
with everlasting love?

I see all my failures,
all that I do wrong.
Why do you still care enough
to fill me with your song?

I feel so weak, but you are strong.
You know each step I take.
You know my strengths and weaknesses
and you know each path I take.

Thank you Lord for loving me
and leading me to you.
Please mend all my brokenness
and show me what to do.

I want to do your will, Lord.
So I come to you and say,
Please guide me each and every day
and help me to obey.

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« Reply #1 on: November 08, 2006, 08:31:07 AM »

Hello Saved_By_Grace,

First, I like your poem - it's very nice.

Something for a title did hit me almost immediately, so here's the thought:

"His Grace Is Love"


You at least have one idea now, and maybe someone else will have something better.

Love In Christ,
Tom

Psalms 37:39-40 NASB  But the salvation of the righteous is from the LORD; He is their strength in time of trouble. The LORD helps them and delivers them; He delivers them from the wicked and saves them, Because they take refuge in Him.
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« Reply #2 on: November 08, 2006, 09:11:40 AM »

Thank you for your suggestions and for your kind words.
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« Reply #3 on: November 08, 2006, 11:43:46 AM »

I love your poems also they hold such a wonderful message.

I thought of a similar title "The Strength of Love".

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« Reply #4 on: November 08, 2006, 12:27:56 PM »

Beatiful poem

I would just leave it at that...there is no rule that says it has to have a title Smiley
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I am unlike most fathers.  What I would like my children to have more of is crowns to lay at Jesus feet.
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