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Would anyone like to suggest a title for my poem?
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November 08, 2006, 08:02:21 AM »
Weeping children why do you mourn?
Have you been sad since the day you were born?
You want to be accepted and you fight to fit in,
but the odds are against you, like there's no way to win.
There is so much in life that you would like to gain,
but you can't seem to do it, your held back by the pain.
You learn not to trust and you rarely feel loved,
and soon all that is left is God above.
Slowly and surely you deal with your past,
forgiving those who hurt you, yet the memories still last.
One little word, once simple phrase,
triggers those memories that can't seem to be erased.
God is so faithful, His love knows no end
and just when you need it most, He sends you a friend.
He knows that not just any friend will do,
so He sends those who are gentle, faithful, and true.
They gently help you get through life's storms,
despite that you feel all battered and torn.
For there's a rainbow that waits on the other side
and for that rainbow we wait with our arms open wide.
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Re: Would anyone like to suggest a title for my poem?
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Hello Saved_By_Grace,
Again, I liked your poem and a possible name came to mind immediately. I don't know how good it is, but here it is:
"A Child Of The King"
Hopefully this helped you some, and others will also have ideas. Your poetry is very nice.
Love In Christ,
Tom
Psalms 51:10 NASB Create in me a clean heart, O God, And renew a steadfast spirit within me.
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Re: Would anyone like to suggest a title for my poem?
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Thanks and thanks for the suggestion.
I sometimes write poems, but giving them titles is hard for me.......I don't know why, but it is.
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I like your poem , I feel alot of people could probably relate due to the nature of the cold world ,
Suggestion on name:" Haunting Memories of a saved soul"
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