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Title: I Nail The Man Post by: ++Blood Bought++ on August 03, 2004, 12:45:55 PM Raising the man up
I nail his bloody hands to the tree And his bloody feet Brush against me He is limp and he's weak But I scowl when he smiles at me And with each nail I feel the blood flow down Like a river it flows down upon my face As I look up at his mangled flesh And I swear I can taste The blood he's spilling And back away and look At what I've done And I see him looking at me Piercing through me like the nails I drove through him And all I can do Is walk away copyright DoL 04 Title: Re:I Nail The Man Post by: Kristi Ann on August 03, 2004, 01:44:54 PM Wow that is very Powerful, Thanks fo sharing this!!!
Blessings, \o/ KristiAnn Title: Re:I Nail The Man Post by: FaithfulFollower on August 04, 2004, 02:19:15 PM Powerful verse truly a beautifully penned write. Almost makes the reader feel as though they are speaking with one of the Roman soldiers who nailed Jesus to the cross. Wonderful use of imagery.
With Love In Christ, Danielle Title: Re:I Nail The Man Post by: Music4Him on August 04, 2004, 04:34:46 PM Wow, that is an awesome poem. It makes me feel like I'm right there.
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