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Title: Persecuted
Post by: ++Blood Bought++ on July 23, 2004, 03:58:25 PM
A single tear
Face full of fear
She takes her stand
He takes her hand

Bullet pierces her flesh
It’s not over yet
She could run far away
But instead she will stay

Down on her knees
While all others flee
She raises her head
Beaten and bled

Eyes meet the blade
“Deny and be saved!”
But she will not lie
As she looks to the sky

Now she can see
She is finally free
“Forgive them I pray
They’ve all lost their way”

Then ends her life
With the cut of the knife
But there ends the pain
Now eternity’s reign

*http://www.prisoneralert.com/*


copyright BB 04


Title: Re:Persecuted
Post by: JudgeNot on July 23, 2004, 10:29:54 PM
Awesome imagery...
Now I want to know the story from beginning to end...
 :)


Title: Re:Persecuted
Post by: Shammu on July 24, 2004, 01:19:39 AM
Awesome imagery...
Now I want to know the story from beginning to end...
 :)
I want to know his story too.


Title: Re:Persecuted
Post by: Music4Him on July 27, 2004, 05:45:33 PM
That is an Awesome poem!  Wow, it gave me chills!  Great work!