Title: The Key Post by: pud on November 07, 2005, 06:53:10 PM This is a long poem but I hope you like it.
The Key [/font][/color]Travelling alone in company, down various smoky city streets. Occasional village hall country lane, local pub. Seeing architecture crumbled brick work well worn pavements, purple foxgloves intoxicating scent of tangled honeysuckle. I recognised all these they were familiar to me. A void nourished with chocolate clothes, people, “things” no-one told me how to fill that hole. One day I stood by a well worn door knocked, asked to enter. I imagined a key was required. I saw numerous ornate brass gold, I toured antique shops Bric a brac stalls. I was looking in the wrong place the key was a name so much more, how then to find the key. Most perplexing the more I searched You, the Key, revealed yourself, to me. You are the key the key to my heart the key to the fullness of life itself. The Key. Poetry reflecting life's journey www.freewebs.com/manicpoet/ Title: Re: The Key Post by: sincereheart on February 09, 2006, 08:08:29 PM I *think* that this one is my favorite! Such strength and hopefulness in your writings!
Title: Re: The Key Post by: pud on February 16, 2006, 01:06:51 PM Sincereheart Thankyou so much for your encouragement
Title: Re: The Key Post by: sincereheart on February 17, 2006, 08:17:20 AM My pleasure! Thank you so much for sharing! :D
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