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Entertainment => Poetry/Prose => Topic started by: cardtricks on March 02, 2004, 06:28:04 PM



Title: some of my poems
Post by: cardtricks on March 02, 2004, 06:28:04 PM
here is one,,,,,,, more to follow    

I have this feeling
Inside my heart
No way of healing
I’m torn apart
What is the point
Why are we here
All I can do
Is live here in fear
Nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide
This is what I thought
Before I turned to Christ as my guide
Now things are better
Yes, better indeed
He can fulfill
Your every need
When you feel down
Or full of sorrow
Just leave it to god
Results will follow

Gary


Title: Re:leme know what you think
Post by: cardtricks on March 03, 2004, 12:34:36 AM
what do you guys think?


Title: Re:leme know what you think
Post by: Kris777 on March 03, 2004, 01:04:56 AM
Awesome



Title: Re:leme know what you think
Post by: cardtricks on March 04, 2004, 10:35:19 PM
yeah,,,,,i know its not ferry good,,,,,,i have done better myself,,,this is just my only christ related one,,,i didnt want to get in trouble for posting otherwise
Gary