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Title: Please help, I need to be titled
Post by: saved_by_grace on November 08, 2006, 08:20:53 AM
My Lord, my God, my Savior,
my Father up above,
how is it that you can love me
with everlasting love?

I see all my failures,
all that I do wrong.
Why do you still care enough
to fill me with your song?

I feel so weak, but you are strong.
You know each step I take.
You know my strengths and weaknesses
and you know each path I take.

Thank you Lord for loving me
and leading me to you.
Please mend all my brokenness
and show me what to do.

I want to do your will, Lord.
So I come to you and say,
Please guide me each and every day
and help me to obey.



Title: Re: Please help, I need to be titled
Post by: nChrist on November 08, 2006, 08:31:07 AM
Hello Saved_By_Grace,

First, I like your poem - it's very nice.

Something for a title did hit me almost immediately, so here's the thought:

"His Grace Is Love"


You at least have one idea now, and maybe someone else will have something better.

Love In Christ,
Tom

Psalms 37:39-40 NASB  But the salvation of the righteous is from the LORD; He is their strength in time of trouble. The LORD helps them and delivers them; He delivers them from the wicked and saves them, Because they take refuge in Him.


Title: Re: Please help, I need to be titled
Post by: saved_by_grace on November 08, 2006, 09:11:40 AM
Thank you for your suggestions and for your kind words.


Title: Re: Please help, I need to be titled
Post by: Soldier4Christ on November 08, 2006, 11:43:46 AM
I love your poems also they hold such a wonderful message.

I thought of a similar title "The Strength of Love".



Title: Re: Please help, I need to be titled
Post by: Brother Jerry on November 08, 2006, 12:27:56 PM
Beatiful poem

I would just leave it at that...there is no rule that says it has to have a title :)