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Title: ONION
Post by: verseode on December 23, 2008, 04:11:54 AM

                     

            Just like peeling onions
            You weep as every layer
            Is lacerated by the knife
            That's wielded washed in prayer
            Accumulation of the things
            You've gained throughout the years
            Are blighting all that's pure inside
            Reducing you to tears.

            Created as a perfect one
            You didn't stand a chance
            The world in which you lived in
            Led you a merry dance
            Now you have the chance to leave
            The pain and grief behind
            Just let Him peel the the skin away
            To give you peace of mind.   
            
            
            
               

         


Title: Re: ONION
Post by: nChrist on December 23, 2008, 11:17:03 AM
Hello Verseode,

I've been wanting to thank you again for posting your beautiful poetry. It's clear that many people read your posts, so we should know that GOD is using it for HIS Glory. THANKS!

Love In Christ,
Tom

Thanks be unto God for His unspeakable GIFT, Jesus Christ, our Lord and Saviour Forever!


Title: Re: ONION
Post by: verseode on December 24, 2008, 04:13:53 AM
Hi Tom,thank you so much for your kind words,it is a pleasure to be able to put my poems on this site to be read.I am actually nearing the end of my collection and will add any new ones as they happen.God Bless and a happy Christmas to you and yours.Mike.